Thick red clay stuck to the soles of my shoes, sweat trickled off my nose like a waterfall, and as I came down to a clearing, I saw the most amazing sight.
I scrambled forward, excited by the species that I had found. A great herd of brown triceratops gathered around a lake. And as I hid between two bushes, my excitement left me, because a huge T-Rex stomped its way up to the water. I braced myself as It let out a deafening roar. I fell to the ground trembling. And from then on, I never heard anything again.
By Kaitlyn
Wow great story Kaitlyn I like your simile sweat trickled off my nose like a waterfall
ReplyDeleteI don't think you need to work on anything but great job anyway
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