There was once a guy named Jeff and he loved driving fancy car like a Lamborghini or Mclaren p1 in this world that they lived in a world of magic there so many stuff of magic from magic wands to broom sticks there is so much magic. Jeff was riding round on his Lamborghini and he was riding down a lane and he crashed into a invisible wall and Jeff just wasted his 1M dollar car he said to God "curse magic".
Lol...
By Ben
Good job Ben.I like your language features and I wouldn't change anything.keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteFrom Andrew valley primary school ;) :) ;] :] ;{ :{
Next time put your punctuation in the right places.
ReplyDeleteBy Tylar