Tuesday, August 18, 2015

Sarah - The secret door



Ugh I say in boredom “yes Sarah tell my how to answer this question” Mrs Parker says. I say in my mind umm get calculator but lucky the bells goes off I hate that stupid bell I say out loud. I play some sport and get slammed on the grass and found a sliver key with a sticky note on it, saying room 11 desk 24 hay that is Anna desk I better give it to her. Or I should see why her desk needs a key. I seek into the class go to Anna desk see a key hole I unlock the door ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh. 

By Sarah

2 comments:

  1. Great story Sarah but next time can you use a little more show not tell to make it more interesting.
    (Taylah Otautau School.)

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  2. Great story Sarah, but most of the lines don't make sense!!

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