Monday, August 31, 2015

Brodie and the chocolate factory

We stood outside the chocolate shop.“Man, look at all that chocolate” I said dreamily “I wish I could just eat all of it!” Mac said. “Came on we'll be late for school” I said as I put on my bag “ok”. After school I was walking home when I saw a $5 note in the grass, I picked it up and run to the chocolate shop. There were so many flavors, there was whittakers Jully tip,peanut slab,Cadbury milk, caramel, dark, light, top deck, peanut butter, crunchy……….
But I picked Cadbury Vegemite

YUM!!!

By Brodie

2 comments:

  1. nice story brodie
    jelly is spelt with an e not u
    and is cadbury vegemite a real chocolate?

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  2. I like how you put a adverb-dreamily.Next time put better verbs
    Kulbir

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