"What peace means to me is...." Chloe was up in front of the class talking about her speech topic, she thought everybody would be listening about her amazing speech but when she looked around the class everybody was whispering and passing notes. "CLASS LISTEN TO CHOLE!" Boomed Mrs.Twig to class 21. Chloe carried on talking... "I think that peace is..." She looked up all the class was staring at her like they were dead interested, that's weird she thought, but she carried on. Then she heard a squawk behind her, a pelican ran up to her and squawked in her ear, never again would she do a speech on world peace!
By Alyssa C
Great story Alyssa C! I love the way you said CLASS LISTEN TO CHLOE! in capitals. Next time you could work on your ending.
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Nice story Alyssa C but next time you should star with different sentence begining's
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