Sunday, August 16, 2015

Madison - The Key

One winter morning I was walking in the park then in the wet and cold grass I saw a key. Then I went home I called my next door neighbour because she lost her key when she went for a walk. So I went to her house and give her key when I got there she was not home. 1 minute later she came home and I gave her key she said thank you.Then when I got home I went to open the door and I couldn't find my key so I call my neighbour and she had my key.

By Madison

1 comment:

  1. Hi Madison, great story I like how did a story. Next time you can try and use different sentences starters and add a simile. Great work! :)

    ReplyDelete