I never liked our new house, I thought that I could see shadows of people . I would tell Mum but she would just say that it’s all in my head, Was I really seeing ghosts? One night I had my friend Jake over, my mum had to work that night so we just stayed at home playing PS3 and watching TV. I had to take the dog outside to go do business. While we were outside I stood on something cold, at first I thought it was dog poo but then I saw it was a key... I was like what ??!
By Sam
Great work Sam! =-)
ReplyDeleteI like how you ended with a cleft hanger. Next time try to do more different sentence beginning
Sam. Valley School
i like how you ended the story samuel
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