One day i was walking in the park and i came across a key. I picked it up and there was was a shed.
i walked over to the shed i could see sport gear inside. i took the key out of my pocket and i went to put the key in the hole when my sister yelled out to me and said what are you doing. she came over and i said i found this key i think it is for this shed so i put the key in and i twisted the key and opened the doors and went inside and started playing.
By Brooklyn
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