One day I walked to my house and I could not find the key, I went looking for it wasn’t under the rock, the pot plant or the letter box. I couldn’t find it anywhere, I started retracing my footsteps. This lead me back to school where I might have dropped it. So I got back to school I looked around the school and on the field. Then I saw a bight spark and it was the house key so I ran over to it and ran back home. What relief I found the key.
By Luke
Good story I'm glad it had a happy ending. Next time make sure it makes sense and to make it more interesting, add adjectives.
ReplyDeleteKaitlyn
this is a good piece of writing Luke and I like the part when you said then I saw a bright spark keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteLuke Valley school NZ
great work keep it up can't wait to see more storys
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