There once was a little boy called Jeff. One day Jeff decided to go on a bushwalk, so he decided to park his car near the entrance of the path.
Jeff locked his car and shoved his keys in his front pocket of his bag. But he didn’t notice that he forgot to close the zip.
He started walking up the hill, and finally after two hours he made it to the top. Then he decided to have fun and roll down the hill. When he got back he stood up and went to his car but... he realised his key is gone.
By Tylar
Funny.good writing.next time you could put more descriptive
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Ummm that was little weird because there is so much Jeffs and why dose it say little boy called jeff parked his car what?little boy driving.but over all you could detailed it a little more but nice story Tylar lol Kai(buddy)
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