I’m at my batch, standing on top of the hill. I am looking out at the amazing view of the valley stretching out in front of me. I can see a beautiful river flowing gracefully down a hill, I can hear the polite chirp of the morning bird song, I can smell the delicious sweet smell of honey coming from the beautiful forest behind me, I can feel the lush green grass squeezing through my toes, I can almost taste the cold snow on the mountains through the clear winter air.
This is what peace means to me!
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Zena ~
Great story Zena I think it might be the best so far. I loved the sentence where you wrote "I can almost taste the cold snow on the mountains through the clear winter air " next time try moving a simile somewhere in your story
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Samira Valley School
Hi Zena, great story I really like your describing words and adjectives. Next time try and use different sentence starter, as you have used I alot. Keep up the great work! :)
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