Tuesday, August 4, 2015

Ruby - What peace means to me

What peace means to me.  To me it means no fights.  No wars and no revolutions.
But it can also mean quiet, time alone and no worries.
Peace can be so many things and all of them are good.  It could be relaxing  on holiday with a book or it could be friends getting along or people making up.
It could be siblings not arguing or couples getting back together because they realised they can’t live without each other.  It could even be people standing up for people in need.
It can even be referred to as hippies saying peace and going on strike.
Peace out bro’s.

By Ruby
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 4, 2015 at 4:06 PM

    I liked how you explained what peace means to you clearly. Though next time you could connect sentences to make them longer.
    from Alyssa.C

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  2. UnknownAugust 4, 2015 at 4:15 PM

    Nice Story Ruby Nothing said its brelliant I love that ending.

    By Ben Mercer Broadgreen Intermediate School Nelson

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  3. AnonymousAugust 4, 2015 at 4:17 PM

    Great punctuation and information.


    By Tylar

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  4. AnonymousAugust 4, 2015 at 4:26 PM

    Love your story especially the ending and theres nothing to fix.
    from Ashley (Peace out bro;)

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  5. AnonymousAugust 6, 2015 at 5:32 PM

    Hi Ruby I love your story next time you could add some more descriptive words
    Keep up the good work
    Ruby valley school

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