“Jeff what’s this?” asked his mother, as she pulled out a
lot of grey fluff out of his dirty
jeans. Jeff didn’t answer. “Come on Jeff” she said as she put the grey
fluff under his nose. Jeff didn’t want
to tell, but his mum was demanding an explanation.
“Dust” he said. His
mum shook it off her hand and wiped it on a towel. Jeff closed his eyes and tried to remember
everything, and said “ I came across an
old cellar yesterday, but the door didn’t budge as it was locked”. “Suddenly I noticed a silver key in the
grass. I picked it up and tried the
door”. To be continued.
Very creative writing blake good job
ReplyDeleteHi Blake I liked how you put in you story Mum was demanding an explanation I think it made big impact to your story. Next time do not put so much speech in.
ReplyDeleteFrom Blake (Valley School)