The lost key
I was walking in the long grass and I found a gold key. I looked to the abandoned house that was always locked, was this the key? A few weeks ago my friend and I decided to have a look around the outside of the house. It was spooky. It had spider webs and cracked pieces of wood, we ended up running away. Anyway I picked up the key and went towards the house. When I got to the house put the key in the lock and ……... It was the wrong key!
By Riley
this story is a 8 out of 10 you need to re read and make shore it makes sentence's I like your simile spooky house keep up the good work
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