Wednesday, August 12, 2015

Brodie - #stop bullying


Any school cafeteria in the world…

J“Please No NO!”
(yelled Jeff as Billy the bully punched Jeff for his lunch money)
B“I said GIVE IT TO ME!!!”you little baby”
J “no its my money for lunch”
B “ill get my big brother to get you after school”
J“fine”
(said jeff as he gave Billy his lunch money)
B“you better bring more tomorrow”
(jeff started to cry as billy ran off with his lunch money)

This happens every day, We need more people to help kids like Jeff and put a  stop to bullying!

By Brodie

1 comment:

  1. I liked how you put a statement it the end of the story.Next time put less speech marks nearly all of your story had speech marks.

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