There was once a girl named bananas and she loved chocolate she especially liked the lovely smooth and creamy dark chocolate. One day she was walking in the meadow when she saw a bright light she it was not the sun she crept forward slowly and she was sucked into a wormhole it teleported here into a chocolate dimension and as she was looking at the chocolate she started to cry of joy. Then she decided to eat all the chocolate and after that there was just white and she started to cry........ Poor bananas.
By Ben
I really liked how you decribed the chocolate and I feel sorry for bananas
ReplyDeleteRiley
good story Ben,you have included a variety of good words but next time remember to make sure it makes sense and check for punctuation,but other than that great story keep up the good work
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