Tuesday, March 22, 2016

5 Sentence Challenge by Jack


3 comments:

  1. Good job Jack. It was a bit hard to understand thought. Maybe you could try to word it better next time. - Sophia

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  2. Hi Jack
    I like how you put one day clouds came and then thunder and lighting. maybe you can make your writhing more clearly. by Abinashi valley school.

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