Wednesday, March 9, 2016

Week 6, Term 1 - The Statues by Jake

Midnight plague labs main laboratory
‘’FAILED AGAIN,YOU FAILED AGAIN FIRST IRONBREAKER MINE NOW THIS,YOUR JOB WAS TO STEAL MONEY TO FUND THE LAB BUT YOU FAILED AGAIN ALL YOU BRANG WAS A STATUE OF THREE MEN TALKING TO EACH OTHER!!’’ said dr inferno madly ‘’but sir it's not just a statue’’ said the henchmen worried ‘’EXCUSES EXCUSES THAT'S ALL YOU DO IS COME UP WITH EXCUSES!!’’ said doctor looking like he was going to kill him ‘’JUST SELL IT TO I DON'T KNOW A GARDENER OR SOMETHING!! ‘’ ‘’but sir’’ said the henchmen before getting interrupted by doctor ‘’JUST DO IT!!’’ ‘’all right’’ was all the henchmen said before selling the statue to a park. regretting and being hunted by the souls trapped in the statues.
By jake
Aka
Doctor inferno

10 comments:

  1. Hi Jake
    I liked your description
    You could really see the picture in your head
    well done
    //edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56ddad666b08280300a64fe5
    Ireland
    Co.Dublin
    Balbriggan
    bob333

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  2. Great Story from Jack Nally ST Molaga's SNS

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  3. Hello your story is very good.

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  4. Hi
    Your story was great, a bit to much capitals otherwise it was great.
    well done.
    By Arsenalrules.
    https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56dddc9c00ff56030091b8f5
    Click copy Put at top With paste (right click)

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  5. https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56deeee3bee0330300e1a21f. I really like your story.

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  6. Hi Jake.
    I loved your story.
    It reminds me of the museum.
    Where were the statues trapped in?
    Check your story for mistakes.
    Keep up the great work.
    WONDER
    MS BRENNOCKS
    IRELAND

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  7. Dear Jake,
    You wrote a very good 100 w/c. I really enjoyed the way you used speech in your story.Here is a link to my story
    https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56df1b83dd7ce303006e3adc
    From Mmolly123

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  8. Good story here Is my link
    https:du.nightzooke//eeper.com/stories/56e299606f6c310300df70e6 sophie

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  9. Hi Jake very good story this week. It was very funny when Doctor inferno shouting at you.

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  10. Good Story Dr Inferno.
    WONDER MS BRENNOCKS
    VISIT MY SCHOOL BLOG AT:
    https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/class-blog/55f90cf671efbe030099a05f

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