2:45 plague lab,main computer room.
“Hacking will be complete in T- 1 minute” said the computer “finally soon all of the world’s nuclear missiles will be mine!” said Dr Inferno waiting for the computer to finish hacking. But then the alarm went off. “ALERT ALL CONNECTIONS TO THE MAIN GENERATOR WILL BE CUT IN T-20 SECONDS”. “NO!!!” doctor said angry because of how close he got to stealing all nuclear missiles controls. When the connection broke all the power in the lab was gone and only the emergency generator was on. “NO I WAS SO CLOSE” said doctor leaving the room.
By jake/dr inferno
I like the computer talking and how you wrote the story.
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Jake,
ReplyDeleteThis 100WC grabbed my attention from the start! It was fast-paced, had an interesting storyline and used punctuation, grammar and varied sentence structures very well. Well done!
Emily, Team100, Sheffield