Wednesday, March 16, 2016

Week 7 - When the connection broke by Charlotte


The windows close and the lights shut off, the phone stops working and the radio glitches.
I rush to my parents wardrobe which is where we keep our emergency torches. I snatch up the first one I see and rush down stairs,Stumbling on each step I run outside and down the street to the electric box. Just as i reach the box i fall and smash my head up against the brick wall behind It I feel drowsy but manage to get up again that’s when I realise that the connection broke. Now how are we gonna order DINNER?

By Charlotte

1 comment:

  1. Hi Charlotte
    I like you used the word stumbled because it makes the story more interesting for the reader.

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