Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Week 5, Term 1 - The Man by Caleb

He was a hero that lurked in the shadows who saved lives and fights crime. He worked alone but never reveals his identity. No one knows his name but people call him Shade. He’s fast and can be invisible in shadows. Know one knows where he lives or we he is but he always is there at the write place at the right time. People attack him but never succeed. It’s like he’s always there and maybe he is. People say he’s a robot, people say he’s a god but the world will never know his true identity.  

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6 comments:

  1. Well done. I really enjoyed your story. by clinton st molagas school

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  2. Love it from clinton st molaga school

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  3. Well done on this week promt t this is like a book i read.Daniel

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  4. This is awesome, but I think you need to put in some comers. -Rawiri Ni :)

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  5. I liked your story but next time work on vocabulary. And when you said we he it dose not make sense.from Amber N

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