Week 6, Term 1 - Frozen by Sophia
Never before had anyone seen anything like it. three very tall, very strong, very rich men with iron arms and jaws. These men believed they were invincible. Until one day one of the men woke up and could only move his leg.He called a meeting with his two partners they each had one less moving limb. So they chose to sit and talk for they knew they had little time left. And after that day they have been known as the frozen.
By Sophia
I like your story Sophia. I wish there was more for me to read.
ReplyDeleteHi I like the way you described the men
ReplyDeletethat was really good
ReplyDeleteInteresting Story. Wouldn't like to end up frozen and not being able to move or that I only had a small amount of time left before I froze....From Jack Nally ST. Molaga's SNS...
ReplyDeleteI like your story because when i started to read the start of the story it made me feel like it was going to be a good story by jack
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