Years ago in 1923 there was a man called Jeremy who was sitting in a national park in switzerland.Jeremy was waiting for his friends Samuel and Josh. Josh was a butcher, Samuel was a baker. Finally Jeremy's friend came. Samuel and Josh stood in front of Jeremy and together they talked and talked about how life is going and if anything interesting is coming up. Once they had stopped talking they went for a walk around the national park admiring all the lovely birds and flowers. They had finished admiring the view then Jeremy said “Let's call it a day shall we” then they all said their goodbyes.
-Michaela
Hi really good story your story kinda like mine. Here is my link to my story https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56ddda9487a005030010607e
ReplyDeleteI really like your story , it is very nice!!!!
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By amysworld
Dear Michaela,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story it was quite good. You have written a very good piece and should be proud of it.Good work :)
From Molly123
The national park sounds like a really nice place to go to talk and meet up with friends...From Jack Nally ST Molaga's SNS....
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