Monday, March 21, 2016

Week 8 - Pikachu by Connor

Once upon a time the was a pokemon named pikachu he like playing pokemon ruby and sapphire.when he was playing pokemon ruby and sapphire with kakuna he lied and said he caught kakuna.but he didn't pikachu lined all his pokemon in a row.pikachu also wished he could fly.pikachu’s favourite food in the whole entire galaxy was chips with sweet and sour sauce. Pikachu also likes halo,skyrim and cod but pikachu hates absolutely hates xbox 360 he rather prefers ps4

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4 comments:

  1. Good job Connor, but next time use proper english for example once upon a time the was a pikachu.

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  2. I like your story conner.-Rawiri Ni

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  3. i like youre story but underline or highlight the main words
    but i like your story

    sam carter

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  4. Hi Connor, great story. Remember to use capital letters for names (e.g. Pikachu instead of pikachu)
    - Danny

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