This morning I woke up and got my clothes on and went outside. I was walking down the street slowly. There was a child and a mother walking past. The mother was pushing the trike down the road. The road was rarely busy as most people didn’t have cars. There’s not much people in this town. when I got to the supermarket, The child was running across the road, The cars were getting closer and closer, as I leap forward a grab the child and run back, The mother thanked me very much and the people around now call me a hero. But I don’t think I am.
By Lucy
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ReplyDeleteThat was very good. But I think you should read through your work more carefully. Ruby :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job Lucy! Next time work on your capital letters as you put them where they don't need to be put. I love the story though~ Amber T
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