Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Week 5, Term 1 - Dog Woman by Amber T


Once upon a time there was a superhero called “Dog Woman”. Everyone loved her- except the Dog Control. This is because Dog Woman would collect all the stray dogs and find them good homes, which defeated the Dog Control’s job. They all came up with a plan to capture Dog Woman whilst she sleeps. That night, they crept into her house only to get jumped on by playful dogs! They all started fighting them off but couldn’t as they were laughing so much!!! The Dog Control grew to love the dogs, and decided to quit their jobs to look after dogs, instead of capturing them.

By Amber

4 comments:

  1. Hi Amber,
    i really like your story you done a great job.My favourite animal is a dog.Keep up the great work.Here is a link to my blog https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56d5f303a50e5803007ba5ce

    from Leah

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  2. Hi Amber,
    i really like your story you done a great job.My favourite animal is a dog.Keep up the great work.Here is a link to my blog https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56d5f303a50e5803007ba5ce

    from Leah

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  3. Hi, Amber
    Your story is kind of scary.I like the way you ended happily.Here is my blog https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56d6b5dc6b127e030037f8c8. St.Molaga SNS
    From Oliwia

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  4. This made me smile Amber! I'm going to pop it on the showcase as it is so different with a lovely ending!

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