Tuesday, March 8, 2016

Week 6, Term 1 - The 3 satues by Jasmine

Rose was walking down the stairs fom a shop down to the court yard. And rose saw three people they were not real people they were stone people.They had a concerned look on there faces and big chunks of gold were shimmering because of the sun was boncing off the stone people. They looked like they were wearing clothes from 1916. Rose could'nt figure out where they worked. She should of known because they were learning about the ww1at school. But she just kept on walking. When she got home she asked her parent why there were three random statues in the middle of the square. Her parent just said."On a full moon a guy nobody new stole them from the museum and put them ."

By Jasmine

3 comments:

  1. That was a crazy story and thought it was a bit funny

    Sam Ctr

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  2. Great job. I liked the story line but just remember to proof read for things like , ' and CAPS. - Sophia

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  3. Thats was a great story Jasmine, but next time you should check your work more carefully. Ruby

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