Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Week 5, Term 1 - Super duper hero by Jasmine

There once was a super duper super hero. Now this super duper super hero was no ordinary super duper super hero. This super duper super hero's parents had powers but she didn't have powers :(. One day her parents decided that enough was enough so
they took her to the super duper hospital and got her a super duper check up. It was a super duper check up because they found the problem. The problem was the young super duper super hero had not been eating her brasil sprouts and that was why the super duper super hero didn't have super duper super powers.  

By Jasmine

2 comments:

  1. I liked your story it is to much super duper super hero in your story but it was very good by Katie

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  2. Hi
    Your story was very good but you used super duper a bit to much
    well done. Here is a link to my story https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/56d47f10684c1203000b7f2e
    Evan
    nithzookeeper Arsenalrules

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