We woke up at 6am in the morning to go fishing. We started packing fishing rods, fly spray and chips.
As we go out on our old row boat we set up the lines with Squid bait. It’s been long time and we can ’t catch anything. We lie down on our backs starting to eat the sweet chips. We don’t catch anything for the day so we row our boat back in.
On the way back we stop at New World and buy a big red Snapper and bring back home for dinner. The girls never Knew about it. Shhhhhhhhhhh
By Caleb
i liked this story how u copyed it off the new world thingee
ReplyDeleteYour story this week was really creative but you need to make sure you stick to one time you were switching from past tense to present.
ReplyDeleteZoe
What's with the capital 'K' in 'Knew'? And 'bring back home for dinner' doesn't really make that much sense.
ReplyDelete~Ryan B