These three men just came back from the bar and are going to jim’s house but what he doesn't know is his parents are in town. So the statue start floating to his house but when they get there they see The Statue Of Liberty and the statue on Night of the Museum who says DUM DUM BRING ME GUM GUM, and everyone knows That The Statue OF Liberty is a clean freak. She tells him to clean his room so he puts his hat down while the others wait and wait and wait.
He finally finishes but they're all gone.
By Caleb Andrews
Grate story but add some adjectives and make it flow more. From Amber N
ReplyDeleteNice but use some adjectives next time ;)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting, but remember start should be 'started' and get should be 'got'. Keep working on your vocabulary :)
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