Monday, March 7, 2016

Week 6, Term 1 - Body Freeze by Kynan

“Last night was sooo much fun,remember when Richard thought the pool table was a real pool”.
“Oh yeah remember when umm you uh well that was really the only funny bit last night”.
Richard and the boys went out again the next night but they got kicked out because Tom drunk too much, so this was the result.  ”It was all your fault” screams Richard in anger.  They got into such an argument Tom stared into their eyes and made them all turn into statues.  Well that’s what people say but I just think that someone made the sculptures and people made up rumors.  

By Kynan

2 comments:

  1. Great story, but next time check your punctuation!
    ~Ryan B

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  2. Nice work kynan I liked how you used alot of punctuation but you changed the subject alot. from Sam?

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