“But how will I know?” Said David.“when you get smarter.” Said the history teacher,“but I am smart.”said David.“no, you are a dumb idiot.”said the history teacher, David stormed off angrily.
David mumbled underneath his breath, then his friends came along, they have been saying awesome David (nickname for David). David hides in the trash can, walked passed him still say the nickname for David.
Then the principal (David's mum) walks along when David hops out the trash.
“Clean yourself up David!” Said his mum, then she walks away.
Brrrriiiing (the bell rung).
David goes to assembly and does really hard question and gets them right and David turns into a nerd the end.
By Rawiri Ni.
Great work I loved how you described your story but you need capital letters after a full stop.
ReplyDeleteCaleb Andrews
I liked your writing it was funny like the bit when he was in the bin next time put a simlie in it. Ajay.
ReplyDelete. Ajay