Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Adam - Bad Weather

By mum im going to my freands house said josh. Ok be home by 5 said joshs
mum. I will. When I got to my freands house is stared to rain, when and my
freand were watching tv breaking news came on saying a hurracine was caming
so I rang my mum she said stay there and i said ok then wind picked up it
got stronger and stronger and my freands roof came off then lightening
struck in the middle of the house then we ran down stairs and it was all
flooded........

By Adam

1 comment:

  1. Great story Adam.
    But try to remember to proof read all your 100 word challenges. Also, put full stops in your storys too. Keep up the good work. From Brayden, valley school. 😊

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