Thursday, July 30, 2015

Ashley - The Thing In My Room

Darling, it’s bed time.” “Okay, just a minute mum!” I yelled down stairs. As I finish my homework I turn off my ipad and chucked it onto the charger, as soon as I did, I went  out of the top lounge opened my door, I was talking to my friend on my phone but I didn’t notice what was inside. I knew it was dark inside, but when I looked up I saw two big red eyes looking at me like one big werewolf getting closer and closer to me, my heart was pounding faster than ever before I quickly turned on the lights BOOM suddenly it….

By Ashley

1 comment:

  1. Great story ashley, i love how you started off your story as it is very appealing.
    I love how you put in some speech,
    Nothing to work on! :D
    Caitlin :)

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