RED
EYES
Midnight
London
1900
“AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!” was all you could here and then
silence.
7:30am
Ring Ring Ring “Hello this is Constable John” “sir this is privet jeff, it striked again at 78b on fox and knot” “I’ll be right there!!!”
8:00 AM
“Is this the house” bellowed Constable John as he hopped out of his car “yes sir” said a man wearing a long brown coat and hat. “My name is Detective Brown” he said as they shook hands.”Detective the lady has gained consciousness” crouching down next to her he could hear her say “all I could see were two red eyes, two red eyes”.
By Brodie
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!! BRODIE, this is the BEST piece of writing that you have done so far!!! It is sooooooo cool!! LOVE IT!!
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