Me and my best friend bob were running around at my house. Then we went to the abandoned house, it was really spooky, but we decided to play spotlight. I was in first, after thirty seconds I started looking. “Bob I know where you are,” I said. There was no reply I check every room I could not find him, “I give up, you can come out now,” again there was no reply. “It’s not funny any more Bob.” I found the light switch it would not turn on. All I could see were two red eyes ….
I like your ending of you story. It was funny when you wrote I found the light switch it would not turn on all I could see where two red eyes. There is really nothing that you need to work on but over all it was still a good story :)
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