It was about midnight I was dreaming about me and a couple friends swimming in a river and we were throwing a ball around and having a bomb competition. So we got out of the river to have some lunch we had some chips and did some fizzy but this was all a dream but I didn’t know that at the time so we were having our lunch and all of a sudden dark clouds filled the sky then I turned around and my friends were gone then a strong gust wind came and then I woke up and all I could see were two red eyes staring directly at my eyes.
By Jordan
Nice story I loved the enthusiasm. Maybe just have a look through the story there were a few words muddled. But overall nice story
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