… All I saw were two red eyes …. When I
open the door. A small kid stared at me. Oh here you are I said handing him
some candy, but instead he grabbed me by the arm. I told me to let go of me. But
he didn’t Zoey help I cried to her, but my friend came too late I was gone. A
bag over my head I thought I was in a van. Then the car came to a stop, I hit
my head on the on the floor and just like it was over….
By sarah
I love your story Sarah but next time use more descriptive words to make your story more interesting.
ReplyDelete(Sophie valley school)
Awesome story you hooked me in from the start and ended it with a mystery.
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