Next time try to make sense. Also you have to work on your punctuation. I got a bit lost in the middle of your story like I said before try to make sense, besides that good interesting story. Ethan (Valley school) =)
Good story Finn I like your hand writing. I think it would have been better if you used more commas. ect- thats when I noticed it, a drop with ladders.
Next time try to make sense. Also you have to work on your punctuation. I got a bit lost in the middle of your story like I said before try to make sense, besides that good interesting story.
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Good story Finn I like your hand writing. I think it would have been better if you used more commas. ect- thats when I noticed it, a drop with ladders.
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