I suddenly woke up in the middle of the night
hearing scratching at the front door. I
quickly got changed and walked out to the hallway to the front door. The noise was even louder than before and the
animal seemed to me more desperate to
get in the house . So I slowly opened
the door. But there was no one, all I could see was too big red eyes suddenly it jumped on
me I quickly got it off and ran to the light switch. As I flicked it on, it was on my shoulder but
it was only my black cat Samson so I shut the door.
By Blake
Hi Blake, Great story.The first sentence was my favorite. I liked how you put in your story desperate. In some of your sentences you jumped from one sentence to another and its hard to read.
ReplyDeleteBlake (Valley School)