Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Maddison - The sounds

I sit in my room hearing the thunder boom its voice so everyone can hear. Then I look out my window, I see the lightning dance across the sky like a graceful ballerina dancing across the dark cloudy room. The hail hits the ground a gentle thud I wish everyday it could be like this, that everyday you could hear the amazing sounds of nature.   

By Maddison

2 comments:

  1. Hi there
    I like the sentence beginning "lightning dance across the sky"
    From Janke' Valley school

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  2. Great story Maddison, but this story only has 64 words, not 100.
    ~Kaitlyn R

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