It is a dark cold night, you are walking in a forest with no idea where you are going.
It is a school camp and your friends dared you to walk into the forest and bring back a pile of berries from the rasberry bush in the centre of the forest.
You don’t know where you are going, they didn’t give you a map or a torch, they didn’t give you anything at all.
There are twigs snapping under your feet giving you a fright every time and roots making you trip over and graze your knee.
Then when you think you are there everything goes quiet and all you can see are two red eyes.
By Ruby
Good use of the prompt! I love how you wrote it so it was like 3rd person! Next time you could work on using more descriptive language.
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Great story ruby make shore you read over it
ReplyDeletefrom luke rm 11
Good story Ruby I really love the bit " everything goes quite and all you can see are 2 red eyes next time try not to repeat yourself I can't wait to read more of you 100WC keep up the good work
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