As I slowly walked into the pitch black cave I heard a strange noise coming from the end of the cold, dark, cave. The suddenly a small rock fell from the roof of the cave. I looked up, and all I saw were red eyes, peeping from the top of the cave. “BATS”!!! I shouted and the bats all came flying down attacking me and franticly trying to find there way out of the cave. I stand in silence as the bats obviously don’t like noise. They swarm past me and finally there gone, out of the dark cave.
By Chavawn
Good story Chavawn! I love the way you said BATS!!! in capital letters it made your story a bit more interesting.
ReplyDelete~Anna :)
Hi Chavawn,
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love how you said flying down attacking me and franticly trying to find there way out of the cave. I love that you have a lot of detail and great punctuation. I think if you keep up the good work you will be really good at writing 100WC
Aaliyah
Valley School
Room 4