Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Chavawn - The Storm

The wind was howling, the ground was ice cold and leaves were slowly blowing of the tall trees.
But what was most surprising was the tornado. The tornado that was destroying buildings and ripping the trees out of the ground. You could hear people scream for help as the huge gush of flood water ran through the cities and streets, but did anyone listen? No. You could even hear the birds and animals tweeting and meowing as the weather frightened them. It frightened everyone. But still no help came?

By Chavawn

2 comments:

  1. Hi Chavawn,
    I really like your story with all the describing words
    Something you need to work on is absouloutly nothing
    It's perfect
    Aaliyah
    Valley school

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  2. Great piece of writing here Chavawn!
    I love how you included lots of descriptive words.
    I absolutely love how you finished off your story.

    Caitlin

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