There I was, just standing there, staring up at the silver
brilliance of the moon hovering in the beautiful night sky.
The lush green forest was so still I could hear a tiny waterfall
tumbling down a couple of metres away. There was a tiny breeze sweeping the
hair out of my face. Then suddenly, a huge gust of wind came out of no
where!
The trees come crashing down sending thorn sharp splinters flying
through the air missing me by only a millimetre!
I sprint through the madness, just praying that I won’t get hit.
Then suddenly, I hear a crash of thunder overhead, as loud as a lions roar!
Then the lightning shoots through the sky, blinding me, then pierces the
tree in front of me. The tree then falls down, causing the earth to create an
enormous shudder! The tree then starts hurtling towards me! I turn to sprint
away but another tree falls down beside me, blocking my only exit to safety. I
then frantically search for another exit but I feel a sudden jerk on my
shoulder and suddenly I am in the nice warm safety of my bed.
By Zena
Great story Zena you have a lot of vidid verbs next time try and start your story with an adverb
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Very interesting story Zena. But maybe you could make it more realistic.
ReplyDeleteThis story is really cool, but make itr more realistic.
ReplyDeleteThis is 194 words!!!!
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