Me and Sarah were playing but someone said look in the mirror. Sarah said no and Olivia said no. ok do you want to look in the mirror and tell me what you see. ok so we looked in the mirror . In the mirror we can see red eyes. Two sets of red eyes sparkly.
By Sarah
I think you need to work on using speech marks when you need to.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said that there where two sets of red eyes sparkly.
Eric valley school
i like your story but theres only 55 word not 100
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