One holiday a family were going somewhere they have never had been before, but what they didn’t know is that they were going to the same place. So as they boarded the plane, they were so excited to go to that special place they had chosen. Afue hours later and they were in New Zealand, they thought that it would have been sunny, but instead it poring like heck it was the worst time to come. As they landed they called a taxi to pick them up. They were really disappointed they wanted to go rainbows end but suddenly...
By Ashley
Hi Ashley I like your story and also I like how you left the reader with a cliff hanger but maybe next time you could make it a bit more sentce well done.
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