I went mountain biking up a very steep hill. But it was very slippery and I fell off the hill and landed in a deep cave. I had a search around there wasn’t much, but darkness. I keep looking and found a tunnel, so I went through it and it lead me to a room that was light, so I can now easily see. I walked around and fell down a hole. Now i’m scared, I think I broke a leg but I can still hop. I continue with exploring all I could see was to red eyes.
By Tylar
what an exiting story nice descriptive words next time dont jump into the conclusion to quickly.
ReplyDeleteBy T broadgreen
great story and great spelling next time try to not jump from scene to scene.
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