Rex took off happy to be running through the paddock by his house. He was on the way to the beach. Rex heads for Maxs car
"Can i please have a chocolate rabbit?"
"ok they are only $1 today!"
"Awsome and now can i please have an icecream to?"
"you certainly can said Max"
Thanks see you tomorrow as Rex waved to Max. Rex starts to eat the icecream and puts the chocolate rabbit in his pocket. Then Rex sees his
mate Cameron.
"Hi Rex what are you doing?"
They chat for a while then Rex reaches in to his pocket and finds his chocolate rabbit has melted in the sun.
By Adam
You put some punctuation into your story and I pictured it in my head. Keep up the good work Adam. Brayden. Valley school
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