One day i was walking past with my dog and i saw a Christmas shop i saw all these really cool toys. So i went and sat down on a bench with my dog and i watched people walk bye until there was this one family that stop and looked through the window. They looked through the window for about 2 minutes and i could see this little girl pointing at this one toy it looked like an animal to me but i was not sure. After they went inside i went up to the window to look at the toy that the little girl was looking at.......it was a camel and its name was Samel.
By Brooklyn
i love the creative names samel the camel who would think of that? well done
ReplyDeletenice story brooklyn nice descriptive language but next time make sure you have a capatal letters.
ReplyDeleteBy Ben Mercer Broadgreen intermediate school nelson